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Wednesday, May 31, 2006

How to Write Article in Six Easy Steps: The Editing Process

Edit
Once you are satisfied with your revisions, you are ready to edit. At this point, your focus becomes the correct application of the rules of grammar and punctuation. Begin with a clean copy of your last draft. Read through this draft and mark the necessary corrections in grammar, punctuation, and spelling.

The editing process will go more quickly if you have a working knowledge of Proofreaders’ Marks also known as Editor’s Marks. These marks are applied during the editing and proofreading stages of developing an article. They are typically found in writing manuals, or you can look them up on the internet by completing a search using the keywords “proofreaders' marks.” When used well and consistently, the conventions of grammar and punctuation ensure that you are saying what you intend to say, the way you intend to say it. Invest the time and effort in making sure that both are well done in your article. By doing so, you insure the clarity of your article and thus, its accessibility to readers.

As you check your spelling, consider the variability of your word choices. Incorrectly spelled words and using the same words or repetitious phrases saps your credibility; it kills the flow of your writing. Being clear does not absolve you of making your writing readable. Consistency does not equal dull. Writing clear, readable prose is a dance which requires balance.

A multitude of reference books and writing guides stand ready to help you make your writing its best. Every writer needs at least one good dictionary, a solid thesaurus, and a writer’s guide which addresses questions of grammar, punctuation, style and tone. Two of the better known writing guides are the classic, Elements of Style by Strunk and White and On Writing Well by William Zinsser. Also, keep a copy of The Associated Press Stylebook and Libel Manual on hand when writing articles.

As you progress through the revision and editing steps of the writing process, strive to trim your writing, so every word which remains performs well and significantly in your piece. As you review your work, check to be certain that all of your details speak to your topic or argument. Delete all superfluous observations and wording. You want your words to flow across the page like a small clipper not lumber along like a weighted ocean liner.

Ask your self these questions as you revise and edit: Are my sentences clear and balanced? Is any information I have chosen to include unnecessary? Does what I have written support my lead?

Next Week: Proofread

Elements of StyleElements of Style





On Writing Well: The Classic Guide to Writing Nonfiction

On Writing Well: The Classic Guide to Writing Nonfiction








Tuesday, May 30, 2006

Tips and Take-Aways: Shaw Guides

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D.M.H.


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Quote for the Week: Alison Headley

  • I always wrote with the idea that what I put out there is going to stay there. Once I publish something, it has been published. I've never deleted more than one or two posts from my site. I don't think that there are takebacks. I don't feel right about it.

  • In terms of being late or not starting at all, then it's never too late.


Alison Headley, Digital Preservation and Blogs, SXSW 2006

Monday, May 29, 2006

Word for the Week from Erin's Weird and Wonderful Word of the Day at Oxford University Press

Erin's Weird and Wonderful Word of the Day:

kenspeckle
a Scottish word meaning 'conspicuous, easily recognizable.' The origin is not precisely known, but it may be related to a Swedish word meaning 'quick at recognizing people or things.'


Discovering new words can be a great stimulus to your writing imagination. If you'd like to subscribe to this email list, click on the post title.
D.M.H.

Saturday, May 27, 2006

Writer's Market Place: mediabistro.com

Mediabistro.com has proven to be an excellent resource for me as a writer and a blogger. They offer a daily newsfeed of publishing and other news relevant to writers. They also include their writers' blogs in the feed which is sent directly to my inbox. They also offer writing courses and a joblistings page. The most recent job posts lead the list. They are further separated into categories by job type and geographical locations. You can also create a search specific to your needs and have updates emailed to you.

Friday, May 26, 2006

Writing Prompt:Perspective~Things Past and Present

This prompt is to be completed in three sessions.

Session 1: Write about someplace or someone you knew as a child. Describe it or them in as much detail as possible. Put your writing away for later.

Session 2: Revisit the place or person described if you can (This is meant literally; go see that place or person). If location, time or mortality make this impossible, use your imagination. Without reviewing your previous description, write another description from your adult perspective.

Session 3: Compare the two pieces. What's the same what's different?There's no time limit on this; you can begin and complete this exercise as time and circumstance allow.

Thursday, May 25, 2006

Tips and Take Aways: Why Writers Should Blog and How To Blog Effectively

I couldn't pass up this opportunity to present a double dose of Tips and Take Aways this week. I'd planned to delve into blogging itself in the coming weeks. I decided to do a pre-view today, because I definitely wanted to participate in Darren Rowse's call to his readers. I hope you find the following helpful.

Although blogging can be viewed very simply as the next step in our ever evolving modes of communication, the nature of blogging makes it a uniquely enriching format for writers. With blogging, the written word can be enhanced with moving pictures and sound. Blogging is one of the few activities where visual imagery, aural presentation and the written word can be effectively and fairly easily presented together by a single author. There's an immediate audience when blogging. Blogging also provides a sense of community via comments and linking. The solitary nature of writing is somewhat diffused by these qualities. Because of these things, I greatly enjoy blogging.

I'm convinced that writers should try their hand at blogging as a form of writing practice and a source of revenue. This week, Darren Rowse of problogger.net sent out an invite to his readers asking them to share what they believe to be the key qualities of effective blogger. I've come up with ten.

1. Great writers are also great readers. I believe that the same can be said of bloggers. They read other blogs and actively engage other bloggers via comments and links or activities like this one :-).

2. Effective bloggers are consistent. They post consistently, daily, monthly, or weekly and stick to the theme of their content as presented to their readership.

3. They are willing to take risks by placing their writing, photos, thoughts--sometimes their day to day lives under the lens of the blogosphere and face the feedback good or bad. They are also willing to try new things on their blog and in their posts from formatting to subject matter.

4. They are flexible. If something is not working, hitting delete is an option.

5. They acknowledge their readers. They say thank you when they receive comments and acknowledge linkbacks or other forms of recommendation by their readers.

6. They follow trends and are able to keep a big picture perspective of their content which gives them a broad appeal within their niche, but they are not copycats.

7. They provide a resource to their readers.

8. They acknowledge their sources.

9. They apply the rules of writing--spelling, grammar and punctuation.

10. They enjoy blogging! Nobody volunteers to wake up early or work into the wee hours to do something that they don't enjoy.

Proposed Book Rating System from Time Out New York by Bob Eckstein

Book ratings? Check out this tongue in cheek option at Time Out New York. Would such a system stunt the growth of precocious readers?

http://www.timeout.com/newyork/Details.do?page=1&xyurl=xyl://TONYWebArticles1/556/out_there/talking_points.xml

How to Write Articles in Six Easy Steps: Revision

Revision

After you have completed your draft, you are ready to make the necessary revisions. At this point, it is time to turn to the guide post of clarity. All of your preparatory work means little, if your article does not follow a clear progression and do so in a very readable manner. As you read what you have written, check for any lapses in logic or missing details.

Also, make sure that the style and tone of your work are consistent. Style is the way your article is written. Is it formal, informal, technical or academic? The tone of an article indicates the emotional or intellectual “sound” of your writing to the reader. Is it authoritative, passionate, persuasive, or humorous?

It is important that your style and tone remain relatively consistent. Sudden jumps in these areas can undermine the effectiveness of an article. Jumping from humorous satire to an involved technical social analysis does not help you keep your audience engaged. It distracts the reader and undermines the continuity of your piece. As long as your style and tone suit the purpose, audience, and format of your article, you can easily maintain the consistency of your article and support the goal of clarity.

Keep in mind that writing is a process. You may find yourself going through several revisions of your text. In the most ideal situation, it is possible to go from draft to revision then straight to editing. However, this is not advised. The goal is to produce the best article that you can. Even if you’re working under a deadline, be sure to give the revision of your article the appropriate level of attention; the way an article is put together affects its chances of getting published almost as much as its factual and anecdotal contents.

Next Week: The Editing Process

Tuesday, May 23, 2006

Tips and Take Aways: The Oxford African American Studies Center Goes Live Today!

This is an exciting day for African Americans, America and academia. The legacy of the African Diaspora has been positioned squarely on the cutting edge of modern knowledge and technology. I'm ecstatic. I'm proud. I'm in awe. Professor Henry Louis Gates, Jr. has once again managed to play a major role in pulling off a historical academic feat. The Oxford African American Studies Center(OAASC), an online compendium of primary resources, scholarly articles, essays and cross referenced charts and timelines went live online today. Three of the core sources utilized to create this academic masterpiece are the five volume Africana, Black Women in America, Second Edition and the African American National Biography.

Students, Teachers and Researchers can search the database by era, subject matter or reference material. Over 6,000 biographies, 7, 500 articles, 100 charts and 90 maps are at the fingertips of users when they visit the OAASC. These resources are grouped by historical themes, subject area and geographical locations.

Like any good teacher, the OAASC points its users to other available resources both on and offline via an extended bibliography of various reference books and listings of internet resources grouped by topic, law and legislation, journalism, history, etc. The database will also continue to be updated as tomorrow becomes history. A guided tour and monthly feature, this month's is the Civil Rights Movement, makes the vast amount of information more accesible by providing a snapshot of what's available through the database.

The OAASC will be a subscription service available to individuals for $17.95 a month and $179 for a year. When compared to the $3,000 or more one would pay to own the library of books used as the core sources for this database, it is well worth the investment. Currently, institutions can subscribe to a 30 day trial of the database.The cross indexing alone is worth it.

Quote for the Week: Conversation

"You just called the man oatmeal."
--myself to a friend after she described a
date as warm, stable, comfortable and sweet
D.M.H.

Monday, May 22, 2006

Best of Me Symphony Blog Carnival

Best of Me Symphony #130 featuring Terry Pratchett
I just discovered blog carnivals this past week. Blog Carnivals are listings of blog posts grouped by topic or category. Think of it as an online magazine with multiple contributors. Each carnival is administered or hosted by one blog and other bloggers contribute posts based on the submission guidelines of the carnival. The host posts the carnival on their blog for each edition. Blog carnivals run on a schedule, weekly, monthly, bi-monthly, etc.

As with most new experiences, I surveyed the territory a bit and jumped right into the activity. Blog Carnivals are a great way to discover new blogs and get your name out there if you're a blogger. The Best of Me Symphony is a listing of the best blog posts from various blogs. Each post is over 60 days old and can be submitted by a blogger themselves or an advocate. I submitted my Valentine's Day post from this year.

Words for the Week: legend and luminary

Who would you name the top three legends andthe top three luminaries in our time?

leg·end n.
*An unverified story handed down from earlier times, especially one popularly believed to be historical.
-A body or collection of such stories.
-A romanticized or popularized myth of modern times.
*One that inspires legends or achieves legendary fame.
*An inscription or a title on an object, such as a coin.
*An explanatory caption accompanying an illustration.
*An explanatory table or list of the symbols appearing on a map or chart.


lu·mi·nar·y n. pl. lu·mi·nar·ies
*An object, such as a celestial body, that gives light.
*A person who is an inspiration to others.
*A person who has achieved eminence in a specific field.

Saturday, May 20, 2006

The Da Vinci Code Review from Slate.com

You hear that? It's the rumbling furor created by the members of the exploitative and opportunistic money making machine which markets Hollywood movies projecting their profits. Globally, movie goers waited with baited breath to view this film which smacks of heresy. Well, the reviews are fresh off the presses. The general consenus seems to find The Da Vinci Code film a clunker that fails to live up to the potential titillation suggested by the questions presented in the book. The reviews I read revile the film, highlight its redeeming qualities ( the cast), and essentially state that the film doesn't live up to the hype.

The truth and fiction of The Da Vinci Code has been mind numbingly belabored in recent popular criticism and religious discussions. One book and its film equivalent have managed to engender a brief religious panic among the faithful and curiosity among the ambivalent. Once again the Catholic Church, more specifically a sect of the Church, Opus Dei, finds itself under attack and availed of the opportunity to set the record straight. Christians of various denominations have seized the Da Vinci hype and turned it into an opportunity to educate and recruit followers. I believe that this brief phenomenon, because it will be brief, illustrates the power of the arts not only to reflect human experiences but to influence or affect them. Essentially, the book and the film serve their intrinsic purpose.

I still haven't decided whether I want to view the film, so I've been satisfying my curiosity with reviews. I've found the majority of these reviews to be pretty straight laced with a touch of humor here and there. This review by Dana Stevens is laugh out loud funny! Read this one if you don't read any other.

D.M.H.

movies
Worse Than the Book
A fruitless search for fun in The Da Vinci Code.
By Dana Stevens
Posted Thursday, May 18, 2006, at 6:24 PM ET



As I slogged through the vast wastes of expository dialogue that comprise Dan Brown's best seller The Da Vinci Code, one of the few compliments I could honestly pay the book was that it was eminently filmable. Its dense, labyrinthine story line is propelled not by language, but by images: a naked corpse splayed on the floor of the Louvre; a car chase around Paris in a minuscule SmartCar; a giant, self-flagellating albino monk. So movie-ready is The Da Vinci Code that Random House has even put out an illustrated edition of the novel, featuring photos of the works of art and architecture that propel the thriller's plot. I found reading The Da Vinci Code something of a trial—to paraphrase Mark Twain: Once you put it down, you can't pick it up—but at least, I told myself, it'll make a swell movie.

So much for that theory. Ron Howard, a maker of glossy, populist entertainments (Splash, Apollo 13, A Beautiful Mind) interspersed with the odd pointless clunker (How the Grinch Stole Christmas), has squandered an opportunity to treat us to a big, dumb summer movie that could have combined the occult frisson of The Exorcist with the paranoid energy of All the President's Men. Given the silliness of the source material, The Da Vinci Code stood little chance of being a great film, but it could easily have been a fun one. Instead, Howard takes a strangely respectful approach to the overheated mysticism of the novel, turning the film into that most boring of genres: the pious blockbuster........

Dana Stevens is Slate's movie critic. You can write her at movies@thehighsign.net.



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Slate Article: Why Is Beloved Beloved?

the dilettante
Why Is Beloved Beloved?
After all the plaudits, it's time to look at the novel's merits.
By Stephen Metcalf
Posted Thursday, May 18, 2006, at 2:42 PM ET

In 1987, Toni Morrison's Beloved won the Pulitzer Prize. In 1992, with Beloved still widely regarded as her masterpiece, Morrison was awarded the Nobel Prize for Literature. Three legs make a stool: This past month, in a New York Times poll of 200 critics, writers, and editors, Beloved was named "the single best work of American fiction published in the last twenty-five years," beating out novels by such luminaries as Roth, DeLillo, and Updike. I participated in this survey and can attest that, from the moment the solicitously hand-typed letter from the Times Book Review arrived in the mail, Beloved was the presumptive winner........

Stephen Metcalf is Slate's critic at large. He is working on a book about the 1980s.


Beloved
Beloved




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Writer's Market Place: Writing to Heal, Writing to Grow

Essays are a great way to explore ideas, emotions, processes etc. Writing to Heal, Writing to Grow provides a listing of markets which accept personal essays. Dust off some of those mental meanderings you've stored away for posterity and polish them up to submission standards. Essays could be your niche.

D.M.H.



"Writing to Heal, Writing to Grow
This is an ever-changing list of print and online publications that pay to publish personal essays."

Thursday, May 18, 2006

Writing Prompts: The Draft and Moments

1. If you've been following the How to Write an Article in Six Easy Steps Series, it's time to start writing that draft.

2.Write about the best thing that happened this week. Did a loved one graduate? Did you recieve a special gift or make a serendipitous discovery?

If you feel like sharing your results, you're welcome to do so in the comments section. Let me know that you're out there.

How to Write Articles in Six Easy Steps: The Draft

Draft

Once you have selected your format, completed your lead and are satisfied with your research, you are ready to write. Please, remember this is only a draft, a first pass over the landscape of ideas and information you wish to convey to your readers. Do your best to stick to your outline, but focus primarily on making certain that you get the information on the page or on the screen. The most important thing at this point is to complete the draft.

While writing, keep the needs and potential concerns of your audience in mind. Cater to those needs by providing the instruction, entertainment, or information alluded to by your lead sentence. Your chosen format should readily facilitate the engagement of your audience and meet their expectations based on your lead.

There are many different approaches to writing a first draft. There are writers who follow their outline to the last detail, keep their research notes close at hand, and insert the necessary quotes and facts as they write. Some writers use a more organic approach; they simply write their first copy as it comes to mind and leave the facts, quotes, and sources for revision. Many writers use a mixture of these two approaches to get the job done.

You will have several drafts as you review your work for mistakes or gaps in information. It is rare that the first draft is a writer's final draft as well. It is best to go for at least three drafts, the initial draft, the revised draft and the final copy; then increase the number of drafts as needed depending on the length and nature of the piece. Writing is about revision and editing as much if not more so, than the idea or ideas communicated to an audience. No matter how important, entertaining or helpful the ideas communicated, a piece must be well done to be well received.

Next week:Revision

Wednesday, May 17, 2006

Get A Freelance Life Panels from mediabistro.com

Tuesday, May 16
Lessons Imparted at Last Night's Get a Freelance Life Panel in Chicago
These aren't exactly detailed, but then again, I was busy moderating (and we didn't record):
•Don't miss deadlines (or if you are going to, alert your editor)......

Writing Tips and Takeaways: About Queries

A query letter is written to pitch an idea to an editor. The letter typically consists of an introduction to the proposed piece, the projected word count and completion date. Many people advise opening the letter in the tone and style you would use to write the article--like a teaser. The last part of the letter gives a brief overview of your experience. The final part of the letter functions as a brief resume citing your previously published work and/or relevant experience which qualifies you to write the article.

For a writer, a query letter is a job application. Like any job search professionalism and presentation are key. Consistency and persistence also play a big part. A recent blog, http://queryaday.blogspot.com, takes this philosophy to heart as its writer endeavors to place a query daily in her effort to find freelance work. Click on the link in this post's title and check it out.

Tuesday, May 16, 2006

Chairman says Starbucks could start book sales by Christmas

Chairman says Starbucks could start book sales by Christmas

By John D. Stoll
Last Update: 4:47 PM ET May 15, 2006


DETROIT (MarketWatch) -- Starbucks Corp. (SBUX) Chairman Howard Schultz on Monday said the coffee retailer aims to begin offering books for sale in its U.S. stores as early as the Christmas selling season.

Online magazine lessons for newspapers from The Editors Blog

Although Slate, America's most popular online magazine, understands today's online journalism, it has no idea where the medium will be in 10 years. It is, however, preparing itself for the future. Newspapers could learn a few things about where they should be taking their own journalism, but there are other aspects of Slate's journalism that are questionable...

Quote for the Week: Flavia Weedn, Flavia and the Dream Maker

If one dream should fall and break into a thousand pieces, never be afraid to pick one of those pieces up and begin again.

--Flavia Weedn, Flavia and the Dream Maker

Monday, May 15, 2006

NYTimes.com: Scan This Book!

Scan This Book!
By KEVIN KELLY
Published: May 14, 2006

The dream is an old one: to have in one place all knowledge, past and present. All books, all documents, all conceptual works, in all languages. It is a familiar hope, in part because long ago we briefly built such a library. The great library at Alexandria, constructed around 300 B.C., was designed to hold all the scrolls circulating in the known world. At one time or another, the library held about half a million scrolls, estimated to have been between 30 and 70 percent of all books in existence then....

Word for the Week: pre-empt

pre·empt or pre-empt
v. pre·empt·ed, pre·empt·ing, pre·empts
v. tr.

1. To appropriate, seize, or take for oneself before others. See Synonyms at appropriate.

2. To take the place of; displace: A special news program preempted the scheduled shows.

3. To have precedence or predominance over: Discussion of the water shortage will preempt the other topics on this week's agenda.

4. To gain possession of by prior right or opportunity, especially to settle on (public land) so as to obtain the right to buy before others.


Another example: The airing of Oprah Winfrey's Legends Ball has been pre-empted by tonight's Presidential address. It will air next Monday. (This is true check your local listings.)

D.M.H.

Saturday, May 13, 2006

Writer's Market Place: Local Markets

Local markets can be a great venue for new writers building their portfolio, or story clips. Make a list of publications, newspapers, magazines, alternative magazines, etc. specific to your city and region. Take a look at a few of their issues,check out their website if they have one, then give them a call and ask what their current content needs and guidelines are.

Your next step will be to craft a great query letter to pitch your story. Query letters introduce you and the story idea to an editor. They give editors an opportunity to see if your idea fits the needs of their publication.In the letter, you should present the story idea, the projected length, and a brief resume of prior story clips if you have them. If you don't have any clips, there's no reason to belabor the point. Simply relay your contact info and conclude the letter. If they accept spec stories, meaning they accecpt the full text of a story for consideration, then submit a story to the editor of the appropriate department.

Friday, May 12, 2006

Writing Prompt: Research and Attention to details

1. Last week, you were asked to complete a pre-writing exercise. This week, I'd like you to take the lead and outline you've written and begin to do some research. Take a look at your outline. Determine what kind of information you would need to know in order to complete your article. For example, if you're righting about fabulous weekend outings in your region you could decide to isolate the top ten and write about them. You'd need to know their location, cost, reservation requirements, etc. Make a list of potential sources, people, databases, books, various reference materials. Then, write next to them where they can be located. Once your lists are completed go find your source materials and begin taking notes, completing interviews and acquiring copies of necessary materials.

2. Sensory writing exercise: Take a look at your immediate surroundings. Now, close your eyes and experience the same space with your other senses. Does this place a specific scent? Where are you sitting or standing? How do the objects around you feel? If you're eating, what are the tastes, you're experiencing? Now, use all of this information to write a detailed description of your setting.

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Thursday, May 11, 2006

AlterNet: Bloggers Strike Back


Bloggers Strike Back

Reporting from the blogosphere has already changed the face of politics, journalism and even publishing. And the changes have only just begun.

How to Write Articles in Six Easy Steps: Research

Research

Last week, the steps of the writing process were outlined. There was also a discussion of the necessary work of Pre-writing. This brings our attention to the next step, Research.

You must be able to support the events and ideas communicated in your article with facts and examples. If you do not have them immediately at your disposal, you must find them. You can utilize primary sources, correspondence, records and recordings or secondary sources, such as bibliographies, indexes and lists. Seek credible and reliable sources to support your work.

You have many options for locating the data necessary to support your articles. Libraries, the Internet, archival institutions such as foundations, museums, and historical societies are just a few of the places writers turn to when seeking factual and statistical support. Public Records kept by local government agencies can also be an invaluable resource. Also, keep in mind that when you’re working on current events articles nothing surpasses a good interview to bolster the facts related in your article.

Make your research pursuits an active process where you engage in an internal dialogue with the text you encounter and an external one with your audience. Make copies. Take notes. Write questions that arise during your research and their discovered answers. If pursued in this manner research can be rewarding and your end product will be well supported by documentation and supporting quotes. Dig in to the task of researching your articles and they will turn out golden.

Research also requires a balanced approach. Use your outline as a guide for your research. This will keep you and ultimately your writing clear and focused. You also need to be flexible while pursuing your research. If you come across new information or details that do not necessarily jibe with the initial angle of your article, be willing to consider following the thread. New information can make your article more interesting or informative.

Next Week: Writing Your Draft

Wednesday, May 10, 2006

Writing Tips and Take-aways: Article Writing

Today's tips and takeaways are about article writing and submissions:

  1. Know your market. It seems obvious, but some writers still overlook this point. Review several issues of the publication to which you wish to submit. Make sure that you have a feel for their style and trends.
  2. Read the guidelines provided by the publication and use them.Make your hardwork pay off by paying attention to these details. Editors' slush piles are full of good articles that don't meet the guidelines, style or content focus of their publication; they usually don't have the time to do a fixer-upper on submitted articles. Plus, a well done submission is a testimony to your professionalism. Even if the submission doesn't get published, a well done submission and a good story idea are the things that put you on an editor's radar. Check for themes or calls for specific types of articles. You can do this on the internet by visiting a publication's website or use a reliable writing market guide such as the one published by yearly Writers Digest.
  3. Don't be afraid to write about unfamiliar topics. As a writer, you will often find yourself in a state of inquiry, asking questions and finding answers. Use this to your advantage. For example, a writer may want to submit to a gardening magazine but they've never gardened. They could create a window herb garden and write about their experience as they learn how-to-do-it.

Tuesday, May 09, 2006

'Questions of Character' by Joseph L. Badaracco Jr.

'How can leaders and aspiring leaders know if they actually care enough to make their dreams real? This question first appears in the early years of a career. Many young people work hard to keep their options open, but eventually they must decide which path in life they really care about and commit to it. Once they have done this, the question of care arises again and again—at least for men and women who aim to make a difference in the world.

The reason is simple: the world often resists real change and resists hard. As Machiavelli put it in The Prince, "Nothing is more dangerous or difficult than introducing a new order of things."1'

from: 'Questions of Character'
by Joseph L. Badaracco Jr.

AlterNet: The Web We Love is Endangered


The Web We Love is Endangered
http://www.alternet.org/story/36002

If the big corporations win their push to charge internet users different rates for the same product, the Web as we know it will wither on the vine.

Quote from "A Love Song for Bobby Long"

Bobby Long defines procrastinate:

"Procrastinate--to drag one's ass in such a pathetic manner as to insure ones place in life as a loser."


A Love Song for Bobby Long is a must see for any writer. It illustrates the moments of highly lucid genuis a writer can offer as well as the depths to which a person can allow themselves to fall if they become mired in tragedy. John Travolta's performance is stellar. He's lovable and revolting at the same time.

We all fight inertia in our daily and writing lives. Nobody is a loser. Get that project that you said you'd get back to going and aspire to attain the greatness of which you're capable.
D.M.H.

Monday, May 08, 2006

Word for the Week: obfuscate

Main Entry: ob·fus·cate
Function: transitive verb
Inflected Form(s): -cat·ed; -cat·ing
Etymology: Late Latin obfuscatus, past participle of obfuscare, from Latin ob- in the way + fuscus dark brown -- more at OB-, DUSK
1 a : DARKEN b : to make obscure2 : CONFUSE
Source: Webster.com


Examples of usage and food for thought:

1. How many examples of obfuscation can you identify in the media--in your life?
2. The villain of the play made it his mission to obfuscate the truth.
D.M.H.

Sunday, May 07, 2006

Largest Faction of Darfur Rebels Signs Peace Pact--New York Times 5/6/06

Largest Faction of Darfur Rebels Signs Peace Pact

by LYDIA POLGREEN and JOEL BRINKLEY
Published: May 6, 2006
KHARTOUM, Sudan, May 5 — After a frenetic all-night negotiating session, the Sudanese government and the largest of the Darfur rebel groups signed a hard-fought peace agreement on Friday intended to end three years of misery and bloodshed in Dafur. But two much smaller rebel groups angrily demurred, leaving open the possibility that they would threaten the accord.

News Round Up at A Conservatory of One

Writers observe and relate to others the real and imaginary events of the world. By doing so, they feed the imaginations of their readers and therefore help to shape the communities within which their readers live. All things good and bad begin with a thought.

Writers can also actively engage in the hard work of seeking and proposing solutions to various social and systemic problems. Today's posts are a collection of articles from this week's news. As you read, ask yourself, "Do I have something worthwhile to contribute to this discussion? Do I have another topic about which I'm passionate and would like to offer my perspective?" Then do what you do, write.

Iran warns UN of 'confrontation' from BBC News


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Iran warns UN of 'confrontation'

In Middle East

The UN Security Council's intervention in Iran's nuclear programme would lead to confrontation, Tehran warns.


NTL 'to slash thousands of jobs' from BBC News


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NTL 'to slash thousands of jobs'

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NTL is preparing to announce a shake-up which could result in thousands of job losses, newspaper reports suggest.


Marvel Characters Split in 'Civil War' Series from NPR.org


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Marvel Characters Split in 'Civil War' Series

A new comic book series pits hero against hero. The issues include civil liberties and national security, public safety and private freedom. And Iron Man and Captain America don't see eye to eye.

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'New Yorker' Editor Explores Art of 'Reporting' from NPR.org


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'New Yorker' Editor Explores Art of 'Reporting'

David Remnick, editor of The New Yorker magazine, says he often finds himself in the "loser's locker room." He discusses how those kinds of moments are important to an effective profile, differences of opinion on Iraq and his latest book, Reporting.

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Literature's Lessons on Leadership from NPR.org


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Literature's Lessons on Leadership

Author Joseph L. Badaracco Jr. thinks future business leaders can learn something from literary classics. His book Questions of Character offers lessons from eight major works.

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Friday, May 05, 2006

Writer's Market Place: Towse's Links to Online Markets and Guidelines

This will be a new feature posted every Saturday. Tune in to get the latest market resources and guidelines each week.

Towse's site features online submission guidelines, high and low paying markets and agent listings. Click on the link in the title to check it out.

Writing Prompt: Pre-writing Exercise

Make a list of ten things about which you'd like to read or write articles. Select one of them and brainstorm ideas for the topic. Write down everything that comes to mind when you consider the topic.

Next consider, what you want to say, learn, or teach about your chosen topic. This is your angle. Write a lead or beginning paragraph that addresses your chosen approach or angle. Then use your brainstorming work to generate an outline.

D.M.H.

AlterNet: On Being Black at a Latino March

On Being Black at a Latino March
By Van Jones, HuffingtonPost.com. Posted May 5, 2006.

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On Being Black at a Latino March
http://www.alternet.org/story/35860

Just as non-blacks supported our freedom movement in the last century, I am determined to give my passionate support to this righteous cause.
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Thursday, May 04, 2006

How to Write Articles in Six Easy Steps: The Writing Process and Pre-writing

The Writing Process is a relatively straight forward six step process:
1. Prewriting
2. Draft
3. Revision
4. Edit
5. Proofread
6. Publish
This process will provide the framework, for the remainder of this text as you learn the key components of writing articles well.

Pre-writing

Before you can begin to write your article, you have a few decisions to make. You need to determine why you are writing or the purpose of your piece. Are you writing to inform or entertain? Are you writing a news piece, a feature article, or an interview? You must also identify your topic and audience. There is no set order to these items. Very often, they are determined in a manner that seems simultaneous.

If you have been assigned an article by the editor of a publication, the audience and the topic of the article have already been determined. You may plan to write the article on speculation or spec, meaning you complete the article and submit the full manuscript for consideration to markets, magazines, newsletters, online publications etc., that accept spec submissions. You can also keep the article on file and write a query letter summarizing its contents to submit to markets for consideration. When writing on spec, you have more freedom in the selection of topic and audience. Another upside of this approach is that you have a finished product to market and no deadline hanging over your head. You may have to complete a few revisions if your article is accepted, but the bulk of your work is done. The down side is that you have completed the work for an article which may or may not be published.

Before you begin to write, you must also select your format, news, feature, how-to, review, etc. Select the format which best serves the needs of your audience, provides the greatest level of clarity for your message and is complimentary to doing so in a concise manner.

Now that you’ve selected your topic, audience and format, you must write a great lead for you article. Whatever the type of article, news, feature, review, profile or interview, you need to write an opening sentence or lead which covers the key facts while grabbing the reader’s attention. It drives the piece by creating a focal point for your writing.

Your lead gives your reader a flag telling them what they can expect as they read your article. Sometimes, it even helps them determine whether or not they’d like to continue.
The type of article you are writing will influence the way you write your lead. For example, news articles are generally written using what is referred to as an inverted pyramid style. The most important details or base of the story are presented first. Then explanatory details, supporting quotes and supporting information follow in an order which presents the most significant information first and ends the article with the least significant details. For news, this means who, what, when, and where are covered in the lead. For example, “KANSAS CITY, MO-Constance Bledsoe won the Fifth Annual Jackson County Spelling Bee at Turner Elementary School yesterday.”

In feature articles, the lead sentence and paragraph act as more of a set up for the rest of the article. For example, take this lead I wrote for an article published at Associated Content.com:

“As the summer heat begins to wane, Kansas City residents look forward to some of the best known and loved festivals and events in the heartland. This series of eight annual celebrations begins in September and continues through November, forming an almost non-stop wave of engaging entertainment for visitors and natives alike. These events are easily accessible and appeal to a variety of interests. ”

Be certain that you understand the function and presentation style of your selected format. Write to meet those criteria. You can revise your lead if necessary as you build your article.
After your lead has been constructed, it is time to outline your piece. Identify the sub-topics which you intend to address and some of their supporting details. If you find that questions arise as you are outlining, make them part of your outline. The answers could provide key or supplemental support to your article. This outline can be as formal or informal as you like. You can use a series of note cards on which you have written your major points. Then list each point’s key details on the back of the card. Shuffle them until you find the order that suits you. Of course, there is always the standard Roman numeral outline with each subheading distinguished in order by a letter of the alphabet. It can be a simple list. Find what works best for you.


Next Week: Research

Wednesday, May 03, 2006

Introduction to How to Write Articles in Six Easy Steps

Introduction

It literally pays to write well. In this age, information is the commodity of choice. You can turn this fact into an opportunity to build a career as a writer or to write on a freelance basis and supplement your income.

Every article you craft plays a key role in determining your success. Your articles must be well written and submitted to the appropriate markets in order for you to receive tangible returns for your efforts. The return you seek may be seeing the article printed in a real magazine or receiving payment for your work and having it appear in a real magazine. Every writer has their own measure of success. As a writer or an aspiring writer, your ability to select interesting topics and write about them in a clear and engaging manner determines how well you sell not only articles, but also yourself. Each article you submit acts as a testimony to your skills and your professionalism.

Effective article writing meets three requirements. It caters to the needs of your audience or readers. It provides information, entertainment, opinion or instruction with clarity. Finally, an effectively written article does not go on interminably; effective articles are concise, being frugal in length and detail.

How to Write Articles in Six Easy Steps can teach you the basics of effective article writing. These three simple concepts: catering to the needs of your audience, clarity, and making sure that your writing is concise, are the core principles which shape any good piece of writing. This series contains an outline of these concepts, within the context of the Writing Process. It also serves as a guide which will teach you the basics of article writing. Whether your desire is to get your articles published or distribute a great company or school newsletter, when applied well, the tools provided in the coming weeks will enhance your chances of obtaining your writing goals.

Tomorrow: Part I--Pre-writing

Tuesday, May 02, 2006

Interesting Quote: Saul Bellow

"A writer is a reader moved to emulation."
--Saul Bellow
from The Bedford Reader

Monday, May 01, 2006

How to Write Articles in Six Easy Steps

Look for my six part article writing series, How to Write Articles in Six Easy Steps, starting this week. A new step will appear each Thursday.

You will learn:
  • The three key components of any well written article
  • How writing for assignment versus writing on spec influences your writing choices
  • Some of the best writing sources available on and off-line

Book Examines Relationship Between Hitler and Stalin from NPR


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Book Examines Relationship Between Hitler and Stalin

Drawing on newly available original sources -- including diaries and personal papers -- a new book examines the relationship between Adolf Hitler and Joseph Stalin during World War II.

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Examining the Causes of Witness Intimidation from NPR


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Examining the Causes of Witness Intimidation

A father in Philadelphia tells his daughter in open court to testify that she saw nothing. "Stop Snitching" T-shirts appear in Baltimore courtrooms. Guests discuss witness intimidation and why there is profound distrust of the criminal-justice system.

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Word for the Week: fidelity

Main Entry: fi·del·i·ty
Function: noun: the quality or state of being faithful or loyal; especially : loyalty to one's spouse in refraining from adultery and sometimes in submitting to a spouse's reasonable sexual desires
Source: Merriam-Webster's Dictionary of Law, © 1996 Merriam-Webster, Inc.

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